Robbers getting out of shop with a hostage

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The KF ROBBERS? NO! WHY?!?
/caps

The concept is ok, but the posing is a little off, the angle is odd, it seems a tad empty, the bloom is also pretty ugly.

“Mom, look! ROBBERS! Let’s get a bit closer, I want to look at their guns”

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And I would like someone to make a tutorial, how to find a good angle.

I’d like to see flashing police sirens, maybe some cars down the street, maybe a laser pointer on one of their heads or something.

Ahahahahaha, this fucking picture oh man.