Sad to realise too late, death was meant to be my fate.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/2012-05-18_000012.jpg

Yep… i tried to make a screenshot in dark place. But this was only one idea which was in my head. C&C please.

You should try to improve the lighting and the pose.

I think the lighting is fine, but the posing leaves a bit to be desired

also you illuminated the brick wall in the back, not sure if that was on purpose or what