Well I posted up the unedited version of this about an hour ago and I decided to try to my hand at editing it. Came back to edit my original post and put it on to find out it was locked! Really I have no clue why unless the title was’nt good enough (what you dont see) which is all I could think to name it at the time.
Anyways here is my edited version (i know i’m not the best)
my original can be found here