Screwed

Had some spare time, also my first time doing this.

Not worth a thread, next time post it here:
http://forum.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1250275

and ask for constructive criticism.

Turn your settings up, use SDOF instead of simple DOF, get a better camera angle, look to real life images\self for faceposing references, the posing itself isn’t bad but I would suggest getting better citizen models so they don’t have mitten hands.

Appreciate the help, thanks.