Had some spare time, also my first time doing this.
Not worth a thread, next time post it here:
and ask for constructive criticism.
Turn your settings up, use SDOF instead of simple DOF, get a better camera angle, look to real life images\self for faceposing references, the posing itself isn’t bad but I would suggest getting better citizen models so they don’t have mitten hands.
Appreciate the help, thanks.