Sewers cleaning [Stalker]

I suck at editing so i just used some DoF.
It’s my first “serious” posing so feel free to comment.

I liked the second pic mate, the DoF fits perfectly.
But in the first one the DoF looks baaad.

Posing also seems a little stiff, and avoid taking pictures at the ugly parts of a model (on the Second pic you can see a streched part on the Soldier’s suit.)

Edit: Could you tell me which map is that one? : P

Map is dm_underpass.

try to use super DoF if you can, the basic dof makes a visible line to where its blurred out and where its not