Short Gmod Trailer

Hello i just made a short trailer for a film that’s nearly done.
I would really like to hear what ppl think, so pliz if you have the time pliz look :slight_smile:
havent really made any Gmod films before, so all feedback will be good :slight_smile:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvkKlk0AYnI

Thank you for your time.

I mean it’s not bad or anything, it’s just very, very drama-cliche.

http://puu.sh/370q1.png

The posing of those front two characters seems a bit awkward.