Well, here are two screenshots, and they’re actually my first. It’s kinda plain, but I didn’t want to do anything too complex.

I prefer the first screenshot, but I didn’t see any harm in showing this from the front. Tell me what you think.

Not enough blue

Not bad. Hold right-click to zoom in with the camera so you don’t get that fisheye effect from taking a normal screen.

The posing on the guy pointing is pretty wonky and the one guy’s tie is clipping with his shirt. It’s also really, really blue. Still, not bad man. Keep at it.

I like it. An when I first saw it, I didn’t think he was pointing, but about to advance the screen with a mid-air finger swish, minority report style.

Thanks for the feedback, guys. I’ll be sure to zoom in with the camera next time, and yeah, the bloom’s a bit much. I’ll tone it down next time.

For first screenshots, the angle isn’t actually that bad.

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