Sliding Down a Rail

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This was one of my first times doing muzzle flashes so tell me what you think. The hot rail-sliding action didn’t get into the final cut, blame Hunter.
Obviously inspired by John Woo.

Original:http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/78/d3c1710b0003.jpg (If anyone wants to do their own version, feel free and I’ll add it to this post)

Extras:
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The editing is really nice and the posing is too, but you really can’t tell if he is sliding in the edited picture. I thought he was sliding on his butt at first on a really thick concrete rail, but hes actually sliding down a thin metal rail on his feet. So I would say 8/10 work on camera angle or, keep this angle (since it looks great) but show his feet.

^I agree, it needs a better angle or maybe posing him a bit more far down the rail.

Cool posing.

Posing looks pretty natural