Love the scale of all of these, I’d say the third one is probably my favourite, I really like the composition. Although that weird green tracer looks p wonky.
I think overall the main thing you need to work on is your lighting and editing, nothing really pops in your pictures because of the lighting looking rather flat.
where exactly are those TIE fighter lasers coming from, the perspective is fucked
and the fact that there is no actual indication of anything being hit by rounds adds to the weirdness of the effect