Smoker constricting Zoey with his tongue

Not as good as my last one but still postworthy IMO
Rate/Hate/Comment and if you rate dumb, be man enough to make a comment about it.

http://uppix.net/7/a/2/f9e22579864772b7dcb64463899f7.jpg

I like the lighting.

The blur comes in a little too strongly, too quickly.

Too much area in the middle of the picture without focus - more of the picture should be filled with the two main characters, with Zoey taking the majority of the space.

I know what you mean Chesty. I posed the Smoker first, added the tongue and after that it was too late. So much wasted space :frown: I should have reposed the whole thing.
Oh well, gonna try harder next time.
Thanks for the input!

dude you blur EVERYTHING TOO MUCH. but its nice.

http://uppix.net/0/9/6/5688f72d0ae94e86cad2903ee8474.jpg

Walk it off, Zoey.

Noted. Gonna use less Super DoF next time.

good.
dont get us wrong it looks alright how it is. just a bit too blurry if you get me.

Yeah that + the wasted space are kinda a turn off.
Must.Get.Better!

You know, I like you Combine. I honestly don’t understand why there are always dumbs in your threads. Rated art, I have nothing to say that hasn’t already been said.

Well thanks Hunter.
I wouldnt mind if those retards would actually post and flame me instead of hiding behind their boxes. What a pussy way to state ones opinion.

This. I like your poses.

You can see the tongue model ending underneath her left armpit.

Lemme fix that.

I expected smoker/zoey porn when i came in here.

I was proven rong, thank god.

Check the S-Pose Megathread in 3-4 days.

:smug:

:ohdear:

oh, and you missed a pun.

My english sucks so thats not a surprise to me. :smile:

I don’t see how a guy in the TF2 comics thread obsessed with Scout is even remotely relevant to this picture.