Sniper crouching in the forest [Scenebuild]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/7135/hl22010060911553466.png

It’s my first scenebuild.
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/244/hl22010060911553983.png

Well the picture is too small even for my 15,6 monitor, you also should make the finger posing more noticable and work on your posing. Now the scenebuild is good and, i can notice the all wanted effort, but the contrast does not fit at all.

Different angle and having positioned the sniper futher away from the camera would have probably made the “crouching” a tad clearer.

I myself would have planted him in to the center of the grass behind him.
And actually made it look like he’s crouching by not cropping the picture from above the knees.