Soldier walking through an abandoned building

And shooting off-screen

http://filesmelt.com/dl/Lsdrt.jpg

The muzzle flash is off and i like the idea of the smokey laser.

Some lighting would be nice also

If it’s abandoned then what is he shooting at?

Work on your muzzleflash a little more, also the green dot sight isn’t that good either.
Nice posing though!

Was going to ask the same.

Laser looks funny.

I like how you reskined him to actualy look like the ODST

It is my hack, my reskin, and was not intended to look like the ODST.

The laser is pretty ugly, looks like a wire(It might even be a ingame wire).