The posing is good, but its kind of boring.
He looks like he has to take a massive shit.
"I CAN’T HOLD IT FOR MUCH LONGER MAGGOT!"
Boring angle + simple DoF = another noob that doesn’t even know about the existence of this thread.
I mean, it’s not bad, but if you want to post your first work (I guess it’s your first work, because of its crappyness), use the thread I linked you above.