Some soldiers going down some stairs in a dark subway.

I tried making shadows with dodge/burn but it didn’t turn out so well.
Plus it’s dark as fuck.

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1562/rpcity80000.png

You should of put some lights in.

I think the lighting fits, but the posing could use some work. You should probably go back and fix those dodge and burn marks though. I think you have a great idea so far other than that.

can’t see shit

Maybe a light or two, or maybe a lamp could help.