Space. Why would one ever want to call this empty abyss home?

Seriously, listen to this while you read:


Also I listened to this when I finished it, you might like it:

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C&C welcome, I cut this short because it was like, 8 AM in the morning. I haven’t slept in 35 hours. :s
This was made in about half an hour, (an hour or less editing~)

Just a lil plot: John, the sole survivor onboard the spaceship “FireFly”, has spent over 20 years fixing the ship, alone, with no one else but the ships AI.

I made this after I wrote this: "Imagine being on a spaceship bound for Mars, the first of its kind, a one way trip to a planet uninhabitable. Somewhere during the trip, you miss Mars, so now you’re just floating there. Through space, just waiting for the food or oxygen to run out, imagine how alone you’d be, so far from home, no way to get back, just floating through an eternal, cold darkness before the lights simply go out.

Deep man."

THIS IS AN EMPTY ABYSS HOME.

ALL OF MY HOMES ARE HERE, IN THIS ETERNAL DARKNESS FILLED WITH NOTHING BUT ICE. ICE LIKE MY HEART, COLD AND DEEP LIKE THE ABYSS I CALL MY HOME.

THIS IS MY LAND, THIS IS MY STAR, THIS IS MY BED.

A little bit more effort into the text wouldn’t hurt.
Cool comics I like these.

ye :stuck_out_tongue:

I’m stealing this bit for something.

That means I like it a lot.

What for? :stuck_out_tongue:

And thanks. :3

Ha, “FireFly”.

Without wanting to sound like a dick or condescending, the comic layout doesn’t really do the comic any favors. It’s cluttered, unelegant and, frankly, it feels very lazy - which is no surprise considering you did this at 8AM. Being a visual medium, comics need a good presentation, and I’m not so sure this was the case; plus, a clean, elegant layout would emphasize the futurism of the story.

I realize you’ll probably reply that you didn’t want to go to the trouble, but layout editing isn’t so hard after you get the hang of it. It’s just my two cents though, of course, and they’re not to the detriment of the story at all, which I found nice.

I wasn’t really going for an actual ‘comic’ style, hence why I just did normal text. :stuck_out_tongue:

I respect your opinion, though. <3

Probably either a short story or a bit out of a novel.

When I read that comic, I hear that voice from Space Odyssey 2000 in my head

Damn that’s creepy

That’s how I pictured the computer’s voice. :3

[editline]5th June 2013[/editline]

OPEN THE POD BAY DOORS, HAL

Oi wheres that story you said you were doing. c;

I actually hear Glados’ voice for the Ai

As long as everyone is hearing the voice as I had slightly expected (humorous and serious, HAL/Glados both fit) I’m happy. :3