Yea, sorry Golden, but this is pretty terrible.
The whole 'Shopperman idea was an interesting concept, but you executed it pretty badly, the perspective, drawing, and shading all came out rather ugly looking. The lasers look passable, but as mentioned before they don’t keep with the perspective and the back one looks like it is coming out of his eyebrow. As for the… woman… what the hell is with her posing? It looks ugly and unnatural. Not to mention the fact that it doesn’t make much sense what exactly is going on. Why are his lasers turning into green smoke when it hits her?
Afraid that you messed up quite a bit on this one Golden :frown: