Survival of the fittest (continues post-apocalypse survival /comic/) (tobecontinued)

Just to be clear, this is no where near finished, I am only posting the first tiny part because A) My laptop crashed and I lost fucking all my poses and scene builds so I raged and now I have to redo half of it. B) I wanted a bit of C&C, I’ll post the next part tomorrow (/today) when I get some sleep, it’s been 52 hours since I last slept and I am in no state to make an emotional roller-coaster that I have in mind c;.

^LISTEN TO THAT. JUST LISTEN TO IT WHILST READING THIS, IT MAKES IT SO MUCH MORE SEXY. AND CLINT MANSELL IS FUCKING AMAZING ANYWAY, JUST LISTEN FOR HIS MUSIC TOO.

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Tell me what you think about this slow paced style, I figured the more character development the better. Eh?

When I clicked this I was watching this.

Why. Just why. ;~;

I’d work on using comic bubbles instead of text on the screen like it is now. It’d direct attention to the words better. Your posing is good and nice, but try to work on your face and finger posing a bit, but other than that you’ve definitely got something going here. I’d keep working on it, best of luck to you.

[editline]14th June 2013[/editline]

Half of the stuff there was mostly a test, I was going to go through and refine it all, I’d love to be able to do it all sexy, but my laptop’s GPU overheats in like 15 minutes, so I have to rush fucking everything. :confused:

Working on making a bunch more to this, so long as my laptop lets me~

Bill and Ted?

Excellent.

Bill and Teds adventure? Jesus tits, I know what my next /comic/ series will be. :’)

(updated~)

What is going on

If this is trying to be serious it fails hard right at the first part. Woman is witnessing her own half-brother turn into zombie and now being shot by survivors and she tries to crack a joke?

Yeah, sorry, but I personally find the editing ugly. I get it that you’re trying to be creative and make it look more “cinematic”, but it’s just not working too well for me. Neither is the story, frankly.