And a another:
The idea is solid, and you did a good job shooting the base images. The second image could use some environmental effects, and you should improve the layout and typographical elements of both, to make them look like true advertisements, while at the same time making the language more engaging. There’s also disparity between the style of the first and second ads; it looks like greater effort was put into the first.
Are you a graphic design student?
These are pretty solid. If they were a little more faded and weren’t in color I’d swear they really came out of an old 50’s-60’s magazine or something.
That “Win a rifle” thing sounds like “buy a house and win a pillow”
“More fun than a pillow fight!”