The Balloonman Prophecies

My story-based comedy about the terrifying, elusive Balloonman. The first is survival-horror and the second is more of a guns-blazing action thing. Nonetheless, it’s all one strange Silent Hill disco dancing George Carlin shoot-em-up car driving Batman-voice not available in Germany hideous monstrosity.

The Balloonman Prophecies

Jack Darkbrood, a paranormal investigator, spends a night in an abandoned town following rumors of the terrifying spectre that deserted it.

The Balloonman Prophecies 2

Jack travels to a gas station in the desert, another place deserted (or so the rumors go) by the Balloonman.

GAWD WAZ WITH THE MUSIK?!? GAH MY EARS!!

Camera needs work. More shots, like when he’s drinking, the lifting of the glass was good, put the choose a different angle and then put the drink to his mouth.

And that shot needed atmosphere.

Atmosphere? I’m not exactly sure what you mean.