The dealer

this is my first comic ever, and I know its waay too small.
And the blood is crap. But tell me guys what you think.

http://old.filesmelt.com/Imagehosting/pics/e6ad428a0bc052db3ba4578eb0c6273a.jpg

It’s So-So.
Speechbubbles were okay, but you really need to learn how to put , in sentences.

yes thats my biggest problem :frowning:

Hmm… I’m interested in where this comic is leading. If he got already his revenge, what now? You should practise your editing.