The fields of Jerusalem (Small series in the making)

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#1

Little series I’m going to make, had this in my head for about a year now, CnC would be hugely appreciative.

All in-game editing.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/nevadatestsite0000.png

http://filesmelt.com/dl/nevadatestsite0000.png

**If it does not work, try this:
**http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/3913/nevadatestsite0000.png

#2

Looks great.

Where can I get that model?

#3

I still think that the left might be just a bit too empty for my liking. But I like the pose on the guys otherwise.

#4

Damn, I had a similar idea with the exact same models (if I had them), but this is great.

The story is well written (minus the moments where you wrote “where” instead of “were”) and well thought out. I hope to see more of the story in the future. As for the picture itself, I agree with wraithcat that the left seems too open and emtpy.

Great stuff, Vasili. I look forward to more.

#5

I always get my wheres and were mixed up, despite knowing the meanings - habbit really.

I was gonna add some ruined tanks or some buildings in the background, but I found it unfitting for a battle that has not begun yet.

Will be released when I finish the project.

#6

If it’s a teaser the picture should have a lot more eye-candy, I mean, without the story it would only be a couple of soldiers standing with swords in the middle of the desert, I’m not saying that the picture itself is bad but it’s not very appealing.

As for the story, I think it’s great, it was pretty interesting to read, and it will probably make me eager to wait for the first part of this series.

Not trying to be a jerk or anything.

#7

It’d be funny if both sides utilized pork as a biological weapon.

#8

hi let’s have a battle in the future but instead of using lethal weapons like biological weapons and flamethrowers we just stab one another with swords

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i’ll be honest. the story is absolutely the dumbest thing i’ve ever read and is so inconsistent with logic that I can’t help but think that this is written by some junior in high school. i’m trying to be nice but there’s no way i can word this without getting the point across to your head. i’d be absolutely embarrassed to post this myself.

#9

Yeah I tried to go back to the save to add more stuff in, but it wouldn’t load :confused:

Future screenshots will have more stuff in it though.

#10

I expected laz0r guns :< or good ol’ jammy l85’s.

#11

Im assuming the only version of that model ported is the male model?

Nice pic too, if kinda boring

#12

Both. But they’re not completely ready yet.

#13

Oh cool!

#14

That’s a pretty neat concept. Hope to see more of this.

#15

When you showed me through chat, I told you everything you needed to know.

God damn it’s sexy.