There are a lot of texture errors and the brushwork is quite bland, your fog isn’t accurate and your lighting could also use some work. However, it has a nice charm to it. It’s the sort of map you would find on a random rotation of a Zombie Master server, I think and I like it. The water looks nice and the general atmosphere is good, although it’d help if you told us what the map was for, I assume it’s something zombie-related because that’s the vibe it gives me. Just work on some improvements to detail and it’ll look much better.
It still needs some work in order to make it look good:
The ceiling is black and it doesn’t receive enough light.
Those labs and hallways nees floor&ceiling trims (brushwork ones or built in texture ones).
Windows needs frames and some dividing beams.
The ceiling is black propably because of a light.rad glitch, i need to fix that, and i forgot to add the frames on windows while i made the frames on doors. lol
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It’s meant to be a horror/zombie map.
There’s 2 screamers already hehe but i removed some of the zombies on the labs to give that haunted feeling.
I was planning to remove that wall on the left and add a railing there and make below a second lab hallway.
You seem to have just added more questions than answers…why is the floor flooded, why is there blood in the lab. Why is an out of order door lying on the ground? Why the russian properganda, when the warning signs are in english?
Floor is flooded because…there’s a flood.
There’s blood in the lab because there was a zombie.
The door is lying because the door is…broken (duh)
Russian propaganda because it’s a soviet base in Soviet Union.
And warning signs are in english because THE MAP IS ON BETA!