The Last Flight out of City 17

Why is it on fire. Wait why is it?

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Stuffing around with smoke and fire again.

Ugh the tv chromatic whatever-the-fuck-it’s-called thingy looks bad

everything else is alright though

ITS CINEMATICCCC

at least thats what they told us at pre-school film studies

The smoke looks more like a smear across the page instead of a trail because ot doesn’t exactly match the angle at which the plane is moving. The setup itself is nice, but the editing what needs work.

Yeah, I couldn’t find a good way to make it seem like it was coming from the citadels direction.

Oh yeah forgot to welcome you back last time, so there you go.

<3

The fire and smoke look turrible. It’s still a nice pic, though.

Oh well I fucked it up but won it I suppsoe

The perspective on the smoke is really bad but I quite like the rest of it.

I think the smoke from the Citadel looks nice, but as said, from the plane, it needs work.

The plane smoke and fire needs work.