Why is it on fire. Wait why is it?
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8199/kabeeeeeeeemw.png
Stuffing around with smoke and fire again.
Ugh the tv chromatic whatever-the-fuck-it’s-called thingy looks bad
everything else is alright though
ITS CINEMATICCCC
at least thats what they told us at pre-school film studies
The smoke looks more like a smear across the page instead of a trail because ot doesn’t exactly match the angle at which the plane is moving. The setup itself is nice, but the editing what needs work.
Yeah, I couldn’t find a good way to make it seem like it was coming from the citadels direction.
Oh yeah forgot to welcome you back last time, so there you go.
<3
The fire and smoke look turrible. It’s still a nice pic, though.
Oh well I fucked it up but won it I suppsoe
The perspective on the smoke is really bad but I quite like the rest of it.
I think the smoke from the Citadel looks nice, but as said, from the plane, it needs work.
The plane smoke and fire needs work.