*His only love… The love of his life, gone. Never coming back, dead. Life was worth nothing to him now… He remembered an old song. He heard it when he was merely a young boy, but he still remembers it.
‘Hello darkness, my old friend,
Ive come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Within the sound of silence.’
As his life fades away, all the can hear is that song. And then he’s gone…*
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