the story of an unknown man part5

“suffering and pain awaits you”

The video might be disturbing and scary for some people.

part1:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3S1UkyHJ9Xk
part2:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=piOtkv1Lsig
part3:http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature…&v=69aT2PAwBNE
part4:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dA0fXxYTdz0

I stopped watching at “He reached a dark area”

Once again; http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=56328

Use that!

Your mouse cursor is visible sometimes.

Lags.

It really isn’t interesting to look at you, running around, shooting motionless NPC’s.

About the subtitles. It pretty much reminds me of when I was about nine years old and I started playing around with Windows Movie Maker.

The sounds are really repetitive.

All of my previous comments go to every single part of your ‘Series’.

Question; Why isn’t this ‘The story of an unknown man - Part 5’ instead of ‘the story of an unknown man part5’. When it starts with a capital, it somehow looks better, IMO.

this is dumb

These get relased more often then call of duty sequals.

gm_ghosthunt2 with zombies? you have got to be kidding me, you even used the map’s scripted events.

again, this is gmod, not some special movie making game.

[editline]23rd November 2011[/editline]

thx for the love

You can make it a special movie making game, people make stuff like this easily:

[MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QtS6daHzFQk&feature=plcp&context=C29ecbUDOEgsToPDskIJyZAvVWNo704wpr5LekRq[/MEDIA]

[MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q90YJIhhloI&feature=plcp&context=C2f0d4UDOEgsToPDskIsh6t6DhwL1HrChaZxG_wZ

You are just not putting enough effort into your videos, tell me how long does it take for you to make a video?

1 week

Most serious Gmod Machinimas take months of work.

Protip: PRACTICE.

Practical advice

When people watch movies, they should be able to see what happens. If you do a good enough job of telling the story, you have no need to say “He entered a dark area.” because if you do a good enough job, the audience can see that he walked into a dark area.

tldr; If you need text to tell the story for you, go write a book.

he was traveling with that jeep from the last episode

[editline]24th November 2011[/editline]

what has COD to do with me?

The second video I posted took me 1 week to make, I could remake the story of a unknown man in 1 day.

This is the sort of stuff I’m making fun of in Stuntmastaz, no wonder you didn’t like it :wink:. No but seriously you should just watch what can be achieved in Garry’s Mod, you can make some amazing things and don’t be afraid to ask for help from others. Another tip would be to work to your strengths and try to write your movies before you film them not during or after in the editing process.

This wasn’t disturbing or scary, it was just plain annoying.