Give me all the criticism you can come up with. Tell me how shit my posing it. I wish to improve, so if you can’t think of any criticism, make something up.
For starters don’t have the words cover up all the action, it’s a bit cluttered.
Alright, I’ll keep that in mind.
I don’t get it, is someone like stabbing them with bananas or something?
Pretty much, yeah, making it an embarrassment to the supposedly high trained soldiers.