You have improved.
Great job with the light.
very good, looks like you’ve reached level 2.0.
The composition is boring and it’s empty. You should pose something more interesting, because i am about to sleep from this screenshot’s boredom. Good lighting on the guy though, posing could be better.
He’s learning, don’t be a dick.
One thing at a time.
Seems like the standard criticism in this day of age