Trench Bombing

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The picture is nice but the editing and the JPEG quality is horrid.

Post the original maybe?

The explosion is too transparent and could use a bit less saturation. AA is lacking, as well. Posing could be better, but that might just be poor models. And what’s with the yellow spot on the ground?

Too colourful for my taste.

clouds are not dof’d lol

This is very similar to an old pose, only it’s Germans instead of Americans.

Why is the german not afraid?

They should have weapons, ya’ know?

Quick! Everyone climb out into the open!

Work on the posing first.