Trying out some Generic poses

Okay Guys, here’s the story, seeing as I’ve Re-re-purchased Garry’s Mod (Thanks to the Hacker’s out there) I’ve been trying to get better at posing, and instead of my usual ‘people getting shot’ poses, I’ve decided to try some ‘People Shooting’ poses, and well here is the result of about 20 minutes of posing, and DAMN is its hard to get their hands in the right position! especially their left hands… well here is the product:
Oh yeah, and there is no muzzleflashes because I can’t edit that good,a nd the Default Muzzleflashes looked like Crap, so I didn’t bother. (Edit if you want)

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/cs_assault000023.jpg

And another:

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/cs_assault000118.jpg

** I NEED ALL THE CONSTRUCITVE CRITISM I CAN GET! **

So please, critisize away!

face posing on both is dull.

The posing on both is odd.

second photo: The guns seems to be held too lightly, he isn’t gripping it enough.

Thanks to the both of you, but I need MOAR COMMENTS & CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM NAO!
:buddy:

The shoulders are arsed too much to the left.
Fingerposing/hand posing is pretty nice.