Two combine, action scene

http://uppix.net/5/3/8/f6455fd32a91693b8385c5291615c.jpg

Pretty cool lighting, but the muzzleflash and some of the shadows could use some more work.

Their hands should be on the pump/handgrip and SPAS doesn’t have two barrels, it’s barrel (The upper thing) that creates the muzzleflash.

Other than that, it’s good work.

The posing is a bit stiff on the foreground character and the background character looks like an NPC.

The shadows are pretty nice and create a good lighting scheme of dark shading and bright highlights. I quite like it.

The muzzleflash is okay but the sparks look really bad because they’re all moving in the same direction - use zoom blur, not one-direction blur.

They really look like NPC’s.

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…The background character IS an npc.

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Would be more of an action scene if they weren’t shooting at Nemesis Offscreenae.

Should of been more widescreen, and drop the border, it’s pointless.

But the lightning is sexy, but your muzzleflash needs a major overhaul, it’s too perfectly round and smooth. Make it more spikey, it’s an explosion effect, not christian holy light.

Don’t really care if you posed them yourself or not, but the front guy needs work, he’s looking down at the ground, didn’t you look at the NPC and use him as a reference? Because you should have.

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Should of been more widescreen, and drop the border, it’s pointless.

But the lightning is sexy, but your muzzleflash needs a major overhaul, it’s too perfectly round and smooth. Make it more spikey, it’s an explosion effect, not christian holy light.

Don’t really care if you posed them yourself or not, but the front guy needs work, he’s looking down at the ground, didn’t you look at the NPC and use him as a reference? Because you should have.