Two men hunting in the wilderness

"Now be very, very quiet, mate."

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/8805/forest2g.jpg

Feel free to give me some constructive criticism.

(By the way, I know the figure posing isn’t done too well, but these ragdolls were a pain in the ass)

The posing is quite off, but I don’t exactly blame you for that - I have attempted posing with these models before and given up almost immediately.

Other than that, the jpeg quality seems quite low, the camera is fish-eyed and I don’t understand the random smudging where the dude on the left’s hand meets his rifle’s scope.

I would have liked to see a ton of DoF.

Then a raptor approaches…
“Clever girl…”
:buddy: