U.S. Soldiers rappelling of a BlackHawk

my first edit ever

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1313/dekenigforest0008.jpg

I thought it was pretty good for a first edit so i thought why not post it here and see what the others have to say

A bit too much filter rape, but otherwise a great picture.

That’s what it’s like when you’re repelling of a helicopter. The dust gets blown around.

Not bad. I get why you did the dust, and it might be realistic and all, but it just feels excessive and lacking in depth. There should be thicker dust towards the bottom of the picture and then have it thin out as you get past the waist of the soldiers, so you can see more detail in the picture.

Posing is pretty meh. Quite stiff and the guy in the foreground is leaning back too much.

Ok thanks for C&C