Using my own motd to show how good Im at english on school

Pretty nice that my teacher accepted it XD

My motd:



   Welcome to Android's DarkRP Server!
   I hope you have fun here.
   If there is anything we can do to make you happier, just let a admin
   know it. All our admins have time for you! :)

Rules

   1. DON'T MESS WITH OTHER PLAYERS STUFF.
   2. Don't spam.
   3. Play nice.
   4. Have fun.

Description from all classes (In cause you forgot them ;))

Citizen

   The Citizen is the most basic level of society you can hold besides
   being a hobo.
   You have no specific role in city life.

Civil Protection

   The protector of every citizen that lives in the city . You have the
   power to arrest criminals and protect innocents. Hit a player with your
   arrest baton to put them in jail Bash a player with a stunstick and
   they may learn to obey the law. The Battering Ram can break down the
   door of a criminal, with a warrant for his/her arrest. The Battering
   Ram can also unfreeze frozen props(if enabled). Type /wanted to alert
   the public to the presence of a criminal. OR go to tab and warrant
   someone by clicking the warrant button.

Gangster

   The lowest person of crime.
   A gangster generally works for the Mobboss who runs the crime family.
   The Mob boss sets your agenda and you follow it or you might be
   punished.

Mob Boss

   The Mob boss is the boss of the criminals in the city. With his power
   he coordinates the gangsters and forms an efficient crime organization.
   He has the ability to break into houses by using a lockpick. The Mob
   boss posesses the ability to unarrest you.
   As the Mob boss, you decide what you want the other Gangsters to do.
   You get an Unarrest Stick which you can use to break people out of
   jail.
   /agenda Sets the Gangsters' agenda. Use // to go to the next line.
   Or just press F4 and set there the agenda.

Gun Dealer:

   A Gun Dealer is the only person who can sell guns to other people.
   However, make sure you aren't caught selling illegal firearms to the
   public.
   /Buyshipment to Buy a weapon shipment.
   /Buygunlab to Buy a gunlab that spawns P228 pistols.

Medic

   With your medical knowledge, you work to restore players to full
   health.
   Without a medic, people cannot be healed.
   Left click with the Medical Kit to heal other players.
   Right click with the Medical Kit to heal yourself.

Civil Protection - Chief:

   The Chief is the leader of the Civil Protection unit.
   Coordinate the police force to enforce law in the city.
   Hit a player with arrest baton to put them in jail.
   Bash a player with a stunstick and they may learn to obey the law.
   The Battering Ram can break down the door of a criminal, with a warrant
   for his/her arrest.
   Type /wanted to alert the public to the presence of a criminal.
   Type /jailpos to set the Jail Position

Mayor

   The Mayor of the city creates laws to govern the city.
   If you are the mayor you may create and accept warrants.
   Type /wanted to warrant a player.
   Type /jailpos to set the Jail Position.
   Type /lockdown initiate a lockdown of the city.
   Everyone must be inside during a lockdown.
   The cops patrol the area.
   /unlockdown to end a lockdown.

   Type /warrant [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to set a search warrant for a
   player.
   Type /wanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to alert everyone to a wanted
   suspect.
   Type /unwanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to clear the suspect.
   Type /lockdown to initiate a lockdown.
   Type /unlockdown to end a lockdown.
   Type /placelaws to place a screen containing the laws.
   Type /addlaw and /removelaw to edit the laws.

Hobo

   The lowest member of society. Everybody laughs at you.
   You have no home.
   Beg for your food and money.
   Sing for everyone who passes to get money.
   Make your own wooden home somewhere in a corner or outside someone
   else's door.

Home Decorator

   As an Home Decorator your job is to Decorate home's for other people.
   With the Physgun you can move and rotate objects.
   And with the Toolgun you can do things like welding objects to the
   ground/wall/ceiling or to another object.
   And of course decorate your own house.

Civil Protection - Prison Guard

   The guard of the prisoners.
   It's your job to guard the prisoners and make sure they don't escape!
   The PG Chief will tell you and the other Prison Guards who to let go
   and who to keep.
   You will also be needed at the Pod control panel or you can be send out
   on a small mission.

   Please don't abuse your job!
   You need to guard the prisoners. Make sure they don't escape.
   Type /wanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to alert everyone to a wanted
   suspect.
   Type /unwanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to clear the suspect.
   Check the Police agenda to see what needs to be done!

Civil Protection - Prison Chief

   The Prison Chief his job is to make sure the Prison Guards are doing
   there job.
   It's also your job to give the Prison Guards direction of what they
   need to do.
   Fill your job in the agenda so the gaurds can work on that.

   Please don't abuse your job!
   When you arrest someone they are auto transported to jail.
   They are let out of jail by the Prison Guards.
   (NOTE: You need to put this in the police aganda!)
   Type /warrant [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to set a search warrant for a
   player.
   Type /wanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to alert everyone to a wanted
   suspect.
   Type /unwanted [Nick|SteamID|Status ID] to clear the suspect.
   Type /jailpos to set the jail position.

IMPORTANT

   You may want run this command in your console: bind h "ulx motd"
   If you did that you can call this window back when you pressing "h" on
   your keyboard
   - Rise of the Android [NL]


I’m glad that GMod has finally done something good for somebody.

Good job! I wish I could do something like that for school. On an off topic note people are more likely to actually read it if you keep it short as possible.

I know :slight_smile: but the description from all classes doesnt need to be read I just added it in cause somebody forgot it :stuck_out_tongue:

What’s your primary language?

Since you are doing this for an english project, I’ll give you some critiques

Delete this one, completely off topic and not even worth it being on here.

Quickly looking through it, I noticed a few mistakes. a bolded word means I have changed it to the proper word or spelling, a word in [brackets] means I’ve added it in myself.

I hope this was somewhat helpful.

“Using my own motd to show how good Im at english on school”

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