Verdun 1916 : "Cleaning out the trenches"

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C&C are welcome

Posing seems a bit on the stiff side, and that skuffle to the left is hard to make out, but I like it.

At first I thought the two guys at the left were making out.

They were always looking for this guy named Charlie-looks like they found him!

You’re improving quite a bit, but still some things to improve:

The guy in the center seems rather emotionless, staring either into space or at the the German being beat up.

2nd is about the beating, the posing just looks awkward.

Seeing where you started off at, you’re getting much better. Just keep practicing and spend a bit of time on the posing.