- Poor shading.
- Horrible flatgrass.
- Ugly shadows(The characters and pros look like they are floating)
- I totally didn’t stole the News Theme from CNN.
- Spelling errors in the story(?)(Hopefully none, I spell check so many times)
- The story sounds so generic, cheesy, etc.(I liked the story but I bet is unoriginal)
I have excuses for all my mistakes, but no one wants to hear excuses right?
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