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What went well and how could I improve?

the Mysterious Stranger doesn’t seem to be actually holding his revolver


He holding it with fingers.

he looks like he’s doing a bitchin solo with an oversized guitar

“I’ll stop Kleiner with the pure power of METAL

One would assume you’d notice since you made it.

in all fairness though your angle really isn’t too bad and you actually used Super DoF rather than most

plus you seem to have the basic idea of using lamps for lighting so that’s good, you just need to work on your posing a bit

This is’nt a bad picture at all, but that hand, you really should have noticed that before you took the picture. It kind of stands out. Alot.

He’s a fucking undercover jedi cop. That’s why he’s so “mysterious”.