"Well, guess this is the end. Fun while it lasted."

My bro did the GIMP editing, I did the in-game editing. C&C, please.

Its alright, for a starter.
Work on your camera angles, its a bit boring.

Yeah, I wanted to put in another model somewhere I but I couldn’t think of a space that would fit in. Suppose the camera angle’s to blame for that.

It’s A bit Dark, Maybe lighten it up a bit
And the camera could use some work, Looks like the gun should be a bit closer on the top

Massive contrast.

Almost forgot the version before the GIMP edit:

Not sure if it looks better or worse.

Could use some work, but a noble effort nontheless.