What can i do to improve?

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Please remove

First off, Pimpage Thread - There for a reason to get criticism so the main area isn’t flooded with comment on my map threads.

Second it doesn’t look half bad, displacements suck but if you had spent all day on this, you have a lot of work to go because something like this shouldn’t take all day. But over all it looks decent. not bad but not excellent.

Too bad i cant move my posts. Think i should repost there?