You better leave while they remain -tied- up, Gordon...

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#1

So this is just something I got inspired by from Gman’s superpowers, or, whatever else you may call them, I hope it turned out good (Even though I did not get the bloom the way I wanted it.), anyways, do feedback and such:

It has some morph, scroll down for it to make sense.
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http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6400/gmhl2city0001.jpg

EDIT:

Okay, so, I took a new try at it, this time the filter should be fixed, what I basicly tried to do was gman using his seemingly unlimited powers to overload a gunship, frying all the combines below him:

http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/6095/gmhl2city0002.jpg

#2

What the…
I honestly don’t know how I should comment on this.

#3

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/2727/myeyes.png

#4

Sorry, it’s my first published work, I wanted to keep the more enigmalike spirit of things with the gman. It wasn’t easy, so it won’t surprise me if you’d hate it >_<.

#5

Filter Rape

#6

I’ll keep that in mind in the future, I just wish people could hand me some more constructive critisism to work with >_<.

#7

Boy we cant even see whats going on.
Make a picture were we can actually see something.

#8

Sorry, but I cant give C&C because the filter rape doesnt let me see anything on the picture.

Edit;

Argh you ninja!!

#9

Yeah, I had a feeling the filther might ruin it, I’ll redo it.

#10

Okay, so, I took a new try at it, this time the filter should be fixed, what I basicly tried to do was gman using his seemingly unlimited powers to overload a gunship, frying all the combines below him:

http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/6095/gmhl2city0002.jpg

#11

I see a gman npc and a few horribly posed ragdolls, a whole shitload of filter-rape. And i have zero idea whats going on even with that new picture and description.

#12

Gman is a ragdoll, and I posed him from scratch, this was my first attempt, so I get that it would get harsh critism, I’ll keep trying, though, I guess this idea was abit over my head.

I do take you mistaking gman for an NPC as a compliment, though.

#13

Yeah the Gman is not an NPC, I can notice because his chest is arsed upwards and his legs are forwards.

#14

My eyes just bursted.

It would be better if it was done again,but with different editing.

#15

My graphics card died. Are you trying to kill my Monitor?

#16

You guys could actually give him tips and constuctive critisizm instead of complaining…

#17

I looked at that picture and now my eyes burn.
Everything is a bit fuzzy.
Please don’t make your pictures so incredibly bright.

#18

The first one is better, as it covers up the stiff posing on the Combine soldiers. Actually, it’s pretty good. But Gman’s face is too blank, he needs a better expression. Maybe that creepy pedo smirk he always wears around Gordon?

#19

Ok the first one with the morph has some red demon in the middle of the picture. Work on your posing, they just don’t look natural. Add some AA.
The lightning just stops at one point and leaves the left most of the screen blank. Colormod really just doesn’t look good.

#20

Honestly, this isn’t a terrible picture. The filter rape is giving me a headache, but I like the idea behind the picture. Do some different editing, work on the poses of the soldiers in the background, and this will be up to par, I think.