you can kill an eagle, and you can kill a hawk, but can you kill both?

only my third scene im proud of. also i saw people uploading music videos to go with the scenes, so i tried that! feedback would help.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/2012-07-22_00004.jpg

It looks very washed out and brown plus there isn’t anything happening which makes the scene look quite dull. On the bright side though, your posing is very good.

I see potential in you, same things as Triarii had already said but I look forward to your next one.

Epic team up!

i used red smoke effects, but it made look brown washed i agree.i will think about that next time.

his hairrrrrr

i fixed the washed out brown by removing the smoke. better?

Yes. Yes, you can.