you can kill an eagle, and you can kill a hawk, but can you kill both?

only my third scene im proud of. also i saw people uploading music videos to go with the scenes, so i tried that! feedback would help.

It looks very washed out and brown plus there isn’t anything happening which makes the scene look quite dull. On the bright side though, your posing is very good.

I see potential in you, same things as Triarii had already said but I look forward to your next one.

Epic team up!

i used red smoke effects, but it made look brown washed i agree.i will think about that next time.

his hairrrrrr

i fixed the washed out brown by removing the smoke. better?

Yes. Yes, you can.