Just a quick edit. Definitely not the best I’ve done though. Constructive criticism please.
Not that bad. Blood is a little too bright though.
Thank you for the comment Chesty. Blood seems to be my main editing problem…
Ouch, that must hurt
Too much blood, it should be more partical-ish and the place where the blade hit would not have dug in that far with one hand to cause that much blood unless… terminatior! Zombies and termintors! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! Heh, but great job though more info on the story though?
What story? Just thought it would be look awesome.